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Oh wow, this story just gets better and better. I loved that Ronon was there for Rodney when no one else was. I hate to think what Ronon will do to the scientists.

Author's Response: Thanks, it will be interesting to see just what does happen to those scientists. I doubt Ronon is very happy with them. :)

YES!!! UPDATE!! Brillianly written and very moving.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

WOOOT!! UPDATE!!! I've been looking for updates of this story for a while now. YES! And Ronon i sso cool and good and I kinda want him to tell stuff to Rodney about Rodney and prove taht he notices stuff. yeah . . . More please????

Author's Response: I know what you mean about Ronon but he strikes me as the type of guy who'd rather prove how he feels through actions than through words.

Poor Rodney! Poor John! Poor Rodney! ::Breaks heart:: Please say you are hard at work on producing the rest of the story.

Author's Response: I'm not sure what to do about all the broken hearts but rest assured, I am working on the next chapter.

[gibbers and whimpers and wants to hate you for taking my idea, but oh it's so good and it hurts so good and good] [whimpers and pleads shamelessly for more]

Author's Response: Wow, sorry for all the angst this is giving you. Hopefully the next chapter will be done soon.

OH my G!!!! Please keep it up!!!! We need to see more!!! Lux Great work

Author's Response: There is more, thanks for reading!

Wonderful! You had my heart in a grip all along. I can't wait for the rest. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

EEK!!! This story is Awsome!!!!! XD Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: The next chapter is being worked on, thanks for your review. :)

awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks!

I truly love this story. I love McKay stories that display just how much the team took him for granted and it's all make up and friendliness at the end, but yours is exceptionally well done! The sadness you write with and the truly different, acerbic tone and straight forwardness you write this new McKay with is awesome to read. Well done, would love to read more :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much, it does seem a lot in cannon that he is taken for granted and it would be interesting to see if, for once, he wasn't available or around to fullfill the myriad of miracles they often just expect him to create.

This is just heartbreaking. You have done an excellent job of each characters pov, and my heart just goes out to them. But having said that, Rodney's last sentence is just so devastating and true that it is hard to see any quick or happy resolution. More soon, please.

Author's Response: There may be a path or two still open to McKay's heart but saying that, I'm still not promicing anything happy. :)

loved it, more soon please :D

Author's Response: Hopefully there will be more this weekend.

Fantastic! I've got shivers down my spine. Poor Rodney. Please post the next chapter soon?

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I've been working on the next few chapters so hopefully they'll be ready soon.

Ouch. That hurts. I do hope you resolve this, but even more I'm hoping you'll post the next chapter real soon. ;)

Author's Response: Depends on RL but hopefully there will be time this weekend. Thank you for your review.

Trying again. Great story, I like this chapter, to think that Rodney knows more about Teyla than she does of him and how despite not seeming to care, he really does, Poor Rodney....and Teyla and Sheppard aswell, I guess

Author's Response: Unfortunately it does seem likely, doesn't it? Thanks for your review!

wow. that felt like a slap in the face. brilliantly written, it really packed a punch. more soon?

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Ouch. That one hurt, but it hit home in a really great way. Nicely done!

Author's Response: Yeah, Rodney's got a few words to dish out that aren't nice to say or hear. Thanks.

Ouch. That one hurt, but it hit home in a really great way. Nicely done!

Author's Response: Thanks.

brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you.

awesome!

Author's Response: :) Thanks!