Reviews For Panic Response
*chuckle* Excellent job. Wonderfully written, and very tasteful with the lovemaking scene. Still gave me those wonderful twisty butterflies, though. Interesting twist with the "ghosts". ----}-@ Krys
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
10 Aug 2005 10:45 am
*g* that was great! I could actually feel John's anxiety, very well done
Reviewer: Amalthia (Anonymous)
08 Aug 2005 11:44 am
I really enjoyed this story. I loved the sense of urgency and the creepiness they all felt.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous)
07 Aug 2005 9:21 pm
"This was really good! The way you show rather than tell was very effective and made this an excellent action/adventure story besides. Please write more. :)" I totally agree. Far too often, the authors tell us what the characters are feeling and doing rather than letting the natural dialog carry the story. I think I understood what was happening to them better by them just looking at the empty plant and saying "Oh. This is creepy, lets go back now." Great style.
I loved this. The whole captured Ancient thing was ingenious, and the responses from everyone, but especially John and Rodney were very well handled. It made a change to see John more bothered than Rodney, and I liked the way they gradually got closer. Great stuff. Laura.
Reviewer: fenris_wolf0 (Anonymous)
07 Aug 2005 4:55 pm
This was really good! The way you show rather than tell was very effective and made this an excellent action/adventure story besides. Please write more. :)