oh dear, I already love the boys. And it would be really fun to see Sheppard's and McKay's reaction toward their son XD
anyway, really good story with originals ideas and great writing, thanks ! ^^
Author's Response: Yay! glad you enjoyed the ride. thank you for the fun comments!
Reviews For Trading Partners
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 1:24 pm
25. Epilogue -- Several Years Later
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 1:18 pm
^___^ well, I'm happy enough, despite all the dead ^^
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24. The Price of Survival
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 12:42 pm
T_T no comment T_T
(although, in regard of these people position about the Wraith, I don't know if they will be that please of what John and Rodney did... T_T)
Author's Response: .
(although, in regard of these people position about the Wraith, I don't know if they will be that please of what John and Rodney did... T_T)
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21. Laughing Death
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 12:35 pm
ah. I was going to say it's good to see they still will be able to contact their child. Plus, I don't think these people have realized their good fortune at having take Sheppard's genetic code.
But... >_< well, let's just say I'm gonna keep on reading right now, 'kay ^^"
Author's Response: I know, I know...cliffhanger! at least the next chapter is right there!
But... >_< well, let's just say I'm gonna keep on reading right now, 'kay ^^"
Author's Response: I know, I know...cliffhanger! at least the next chapter is right there!
20. The Green City
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 12:10 pm
uhoh, long term relation welcome back ^^ and Jana was kind of devious with this last comment XD
well, I would like to know how good they had managed, but I'm sure it would have been quite a pain in the a** to explain ;p anyway, your half said explanations are tempting ^^
Author's Response: I'm glad it's working for you...
well, I would like to know how good they had managed, but I'm sure it would have been quite a pain in the a** to explain ;p anyway, your half said explanations are tempting ^^
Author's Response: I'm glad it's working for you...
19. The Barbarian and the Harem Boy
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 11:58 am
I like the fact you show that John isn't a superman :) a leadership in the Atlantis city damn well isn't vacation !
Author's Response: it wouldn't be, would it? And of course he'd keep up a good face in front of his boss and his men, but with his partner he could relax and let the stress show sometimes...
Author's Response: it wouldn't be, would it? And of course he'd keep up a good face in front of his boss and his men, but with his partner he could relax and let the stress show sometimes...
18. Always Worth It
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 11:50 am
again, damn sad. but well, no other solution about it, so... >_
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17. The House of Shame
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 11:38 am
oh, this is good for Jana. I was worried about her future ^^ and the awkward face to face was kind of funny ;p
Author's Response: well, these folks have their own lives, don't they? I'm glad you're liking Jana. :)
Author's Response: well, these folks have their own lives, don't they? I'm glad you're liking Jana. :)
15. Yes, Mother
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 11:29 am
oh, fun moments are good, really good ^^ *sniggers* XD
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was cute and funny. I was trying to keep it light, here...
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was cute and funny. I was trying to keep it light, here...
13. Rodney of Arabia and the Porno Flick
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 11:11 am
hum, this is turning like kind of a sad thing for the girls finally. but well, it was predictable for them T_T
Author's Response: well...sad or not, it was the *point* of the exercise, after all.... what can you do?
Author's Response: well...sad or not, it was the *point* of the exercise, after all.... what can you do?
12. Winning the Baby Sweepstakes
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 11:07 am
Hand porn... oh god, I don't know which emotion was the strongest : amusement, or pleasure to see them all having "happy" time ^^
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm sure John & Rodney would make the best of such a situation...
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm sure John & Rodney would make the best of such a situation...
11. Not Chopped Liver
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 11:01 am
well, I was quite surprised with the whole whore idea at first, but you made it really well, and I appreciate it finally :)
Author's Response: I treated this theme fairly lightly (though less so at the end of the story), but Seperis on LJ had a more tragic rendering of the same theme....
Author's Response: I treated this theme fairly lightly (though less so at the end of the story), but Seperis on LJ had a more tragic rendering of the same theme....
10. Mr. Popularity
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 10:55 am
hum, long term lovers ^^ I like those little private moments, it's quite cute ;p
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy it! I like established relationships. it doesn't have to be a first-time all the time...
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy it! I like established relationships. it doesn't have to be a first-time all the time...
9. All About the Cuddling
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 10:50 am
oh, this is great! they are so human and I like how you show the fact that they are colonists in all aspects ^^
Author's Response: I'm really surprised they've never shown the Athosians picking up at least some Earth-style customs in canon, especially since John seems to have bonded with the Athosian kids...
Author's Response: I'm really surprised they've never shown the Athosians picking up at least some Earth-style customs in canon, especially since John seems to have bonded with the Athosian kids...
8. Knitting, Football, and the Inter-galactic Clap
Reviewer: Anyssia (Signed)
30 Oct 2007 10:43 am
this is really interesting! I mean, very detailed and a lot of good ideas. I like the new world and your descriptions ^^
Author's Response: so glad you're enjoying it! thanks for the fb.
Author's Response: so glad you're enjoying it! thanks for the fb.
7. Never Forget an Eyebrow
Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous)
17 May 2006 2:49 am
I really enjoyed this story and will check out any others you have posted.
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know you liked the story, Emma! Happy reading to you! wags, springwoof
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know you liked the story, Emma! Happy reading to you! wags, springwoof
25. Epilogue -- Several Years Later
Reviewer: diannelamerc (Signed)
11 Feb 2006 12:08 am
Nice job with the original characters and world and integrating them with the existing canon.
Plus, just a really cool story! :)
Author's Response: so glad you enjoyed it! thanks for letting me know. wags, springwoof
Author's Response: so glad you enjoyed it! thanks for letting me know. wags, springwoof
25. Epilogue -- Several Years Later
Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
10 Jan 2006 4:56 pm
God, this was spectacularly awesome.
Even the spawn of Rodney and John would end up getting into trouble together, huh? ;)
Wondrous, wondrous tale, hon.
----}-@
Krys
Author's Response: glad you like it! yep, "spawn" is the perfect word for those little troublemakers...
Author's Response: glad you like it! yep, "spawn" is the perfect word for those little troublemakers...
25. Epilogue -- Several Years Later
Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
10 Jan 2006 4:52 pm
Aw, that was wonderful. Horribly sad, but cool.
----}-@
Krys
Author's Response: glad you liked it so much! I'm grateful for all the nice feedback
Author's Response: glad you liked it so much! I'm grateful for all the nice feedback
24. The Price of Survival
Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
10 Jan 2006 4:40 pm
Oh, augh. Skull fracture, and that damned stubborn man went on despite it. Please tel me Rodney hasn't been having seizures, too? Bad bad bad...
----}-@
Krys
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23. Some Damn Fool Thing