Wow, powerful stuff. Great little piece.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
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Reviewer: Regann (Anonymous)
22 Sep 2005 12:32 am
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Reviewer: Scribewraith (Signed)
16 Aug 2005 8:02 am
Wow! I really love Rodney's voice and the way that John's character is revealed. This story is practically perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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Reviewer: sundara (Anonymous)
14 Aug 2005 11:26 pm
What a lovely piece! Poetic, slow, evocative in unexpected ways...very nice.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Author's Response: Thanks :)
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
12 Aug 2005 7:25 pm
Oh I like this. It's a great little look at John's conflicted emotions. I liked the way Rodney differentiated between his John and Colonel Sheppard when the dog tags go back on. I'm glad Rodney convinced Col. Sheppard to go away again :). Laura.
Author's Response: Glad you liked :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked :)
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