Reviews For Not Exactly a Day at the Beach
*snickersnort* The Holy Grail is one of the best movies of all frickin time. *nods sagely* I never tire of reading this story. Awesome job. ----}-@ Krys
Ooo, nice fleeing-from-the-cat action. I liked the way they looked out for each other and kept up the snark too. I liked seeing things from the rescue teams pov as well; it added an extra layer of tension when they knew the cat was close and our guys didn't. I liked the way you made it seem that John was going to get out of it unscathed...and then flattened him and stopped his breathing! The slightly hysterical come down from the stress was funny, mostly for Caldwell and Teyla's alarmed expressions :). I'm glad they're all on the mend now though. Great story. Laura.
This is great so far. I liked the nice day of relaxation at the beginning. All our boys deserve to have a little R&R. This chapter is great too. I liked the way it jumped straight into the search; it was like a sudden shot of adrenaline because I hadn't suspected anything after the end of chapter one. Laura.
Reviewer: Jaws (Anonymous)
17 Aug 2005 4:21 am
I like it and would like to see more in this catergory!!!!