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Reviewer: Maryilee (Anonymous)
03 Oct 2008 3:31 pm
This is a well-written and exciting story. The McKay and Sheppard interactions are great and the battle scene was excellent. I know that those can be very difficult to write, but I had no trouble following it.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
22 Jan 2006 11:01 pm
I loved this. I remember reading it before- probably, but it was worth a second look. The deep friendship between John and Rodney is very well done here. Both their thoughts show how important the other man is to them; Rodney thinking about the hole John would leave, and ohn thinking about how Rodney is his conscious and makes John try harder. Very nice. The others were well done too, especially Ronon and Carson's amused exasperation at Rodney's complaints :). Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks Laura, it's always a good sign if someone wants to *reread* a fic!
Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
22 Jan 2006 7:26 pm
*snickersnort* "Moooooom, Johnny keeps picking at his stitches!" "Johnny, how many times do I have to tell you to leave those alone?" *death glare aimed at supercilious smirk* *snickersnort* Children... Excelent job, hon. As always. ----}-@ Krys

Author's Response: Thanks, Krys. Those two are overgrown boys, definitely. :)
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
22 Jan 2006 4:13 pm
Yay! that was great! Fantastic whumping, emotional trauma, friendship, everything I love hehe

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm horrible for not getting this up here sooner, but I forgot about beginning to archive here. Then moved, lost my password...eeek, but it's all straight now so I can start getting other stuff up here (and it's all complete, too *grin*).
Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
16 Oct 2005 10:51 am
Heh. NEVER say that, 'cause then you just jinx yourselves. ;) Can't wait to see if it WAS Rodney's mouth that got them in trouble, or if it was one of the other guys. *BG* Excellent read so far! ----}-@ Krys
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
20 Aug 2005 11:29 pm
Oooh great start *g*