Reviews For Alone

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Reviewer: nevynslash (Signed)
16 Sep 2005 1:49 am
Okay, that was sad. And what I don't understand is how they can't survive outside the city. They have friends and surely it can't be from lack of food. How horrible to think that technology would end up making us so incapable of surviving on our own. But nicely written. Thank you. ^^

Author's Response: The way I thought of it when writing the story was this - Atlantis had everyone on it. When she was destroyed, the few survivors found themselves on the mainland, including Carson, but sadly he was without supplies and so they all fell. Thank you for reading. :)
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
25 Aug 2005 11:33 pm
Powerful, very powerful. I would have enjoyed an actual story, though. One in which there was dialog, people crying as they buried Carson, people resigning to their fate as Elizabeth is buried, and more detail on how John and Rodney started a relationship. Maybe (if you want to be my favorite person in the whole wide world) you could make this into the prologue of an epic in which each thing you describe takes place in more detail. Please, don't stop this fic now! Please, please, please, please!

Author's Response: I could very much do that, though not right now. So many WIPs I need to finish first but I'll let you into the secret - there's a touch more for this story yet. :)
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
21 Aug 2005 12:38 am
Well, I've sat staring at the review box for several minutes, trying to figure out what to say. I'm still not entirely sure, but I'll try. This was so sad, hearing how few made it out of Atlantis and then how they gradually lost them one by one, until only John and Rodney remained. It was good to know that they found each other and some happiness for a time, but then that just made it hurt more when John thought about losing Rodney :(. And his thought about being the last one, with no one to bury him...::sniffle::. And then, to add insult to injury, the Wraith took him too. I choose to believe he got to be with Rodney again finally, it cheers me up a little. Laura.

Author's Response: Oh, of course he got to be with Rodney again. Rodney waited for him just as John knew he would. :) Thank you.