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Reviewer: Korilian (Signed)
08 Nov 2007 6:47 pm
That's kind of awesome.
Reviewer: kamelion (Anonymous)
27 Nov 2005 6:33 pm
Well, here's a little gem! I like the way you keep Rodney's internal thoughts and feelings consistent as the scenes around him changes, the way you break in from one scene and lead to the next. All are fluid transistions while still conveying a passage of time, and you don't loose the point of the fic. Also like that you don't feel the need to fill in these scenes too much, like with Rodney and Shep in the cave. Just enough background inserted into the dialogue to set the scene without detailing it and throwing the point of the story off. Very realistic RL clips. :) I like how Rodney blames his reactions on things like caffiene withdrawl and low blood sugar. Heaven forbid the man should house an honest, heartfelt feeling! LOL!! Very well done. I really enjoyed this!