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Reviewer: daydreaming readhead (Signed)
19 Jan 2012 6:19 am
Oh, this is heartbreaking. I would love to read more in this universe, should you write it. What did the Atlanteans do that they were accused of treason? What brought the government to such a place that the president had a private army, that they shackled Jack, threatened Daniel, and simply declared Elizabeth, John, and Rodney (a Canadian citizen) guilty without a trial, and executed them accordingly? Why weren't Jack and Daniel so chillingly executed as well? (Or were their captors just waiting for Jack to get the three back from Atlantis, and killed them after anyway?)

A short story like this is really powerful in that you can pack in a lot of punch; it's quite dense with emotion. It tells a lot of story in a few words, and a lot of that story is left up to the reader, it is in the questions we ask ourselves after, in the answers we decide upon individually.

I love this fic. It is beautiful, chilling, and deeply heart-rending. It could use a quick read from a beta to tidy things up a bit (I noticed a few typos, and why is Rodney, a Canadian civilian, subject to all of the rules of the American military?).

As I said, I love this fic. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Reviewer: lollypop (Signed)
06 Nov 2007 12:52 pm
well... that was sad
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Reviewer: gg hh (Anonymous)
06 Nov 2006 8:57 am
the story sucks

Author's Response: Ok, if you don't like it fair enough but instead of leaving an anonymous review telling me so why not leaving a signed one telling me why and what I could do to fix it or write a better one in the future?
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Reviewer: Niala (Anonymous)
30 Sep 2005 3:36 am
Hmm...where to begin. First of all, what's the point of this fic? Second of all, this makes no sense. Thirdly, it needs to be beta'd. Fourthly, John is in the military, not Rodney. Fifthly, uh...there is no fifth point that hasn't been covered in 1-4. And sixthly, was the plot sucked into a parallel universe and this was all that was left behind? If so, I envy the rest of that plot.
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Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
30 Sep 2005 1:34 am
Holy. Fucking. Shit. *waves bye-bye to democracy* ----}-@ Krys, who really liked this
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Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
30 Sep 2005 12:21 am
oh gawd! That was....awesome writing! you took my heart and ripped it out and stomped all over it! *g* good job hehee
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Reviewer: Icebox (Anonymous)
29 Sep 2005 7:15 pm
damn that was depressing. Good, but depressing. would have like to see more of it, possibly different viewpoints, but good.
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Reviewer: Azar Darkstar (Signed)
29 Sep 2005 6:33 pm
That was good... but disturbing on so very many levels. Azar
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