Reviews For My Immortal

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Reviewer: enodemon (Anonymous)
04 Mar 2007 10:20 pm
Oh, please! Sad, yes. Dumb, yes. I love the song too, but, honestlly John killing himself like that is just all worng. Maybe he would volunteer on a Kamikaze mission? Yeah, I can picture him doing that, he's just too responsible to comit selfish suicide. But you wrote a very compelling story about love lost, and I respect that. Very good song fic, too.

Author's Response: well thanks. I love feedback, even if it isn't as wonderful as I'd like :) And how would any of us grow and learn if we didn't have people telling us what could change? and as for the story... you know there are times in our lives where things are, not only not going our way... but running the other direction, and those times can effect everything including fic writing. and I know that in the real world (real world as seen on tv :) ) John would never do that but hey... we'd never see him... frelling Rodney either :) We have a few allowances to make things go another way sometimes. Again, thanks for the feedback! As a ficwriter I feed off the stuff :) Thanks for reading!
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Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
07 Oct 2005 1:30 pm
Waaaaaaaaaa! That was so sad! Beautifully written, heartbreakingly so. *sniff* Awesome job!
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Reviewer: Debs (Anonymous)
04 Oct 2005 6:14 pm
Beautiful Absolutley Beautiful i love my immortal by evanescence and this story has just blown me away, gunna go have a little sob now, but thats a good thing, cos this story is just beautiful. keep writing :)
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Reviewer: Tonia Barone (Signed)
03 Oct 2005 10:53 pm
*blinks to keep tears at bay* This was so sad! Though I seriously wanna smack Carson. "I think he wants to die." Well, DUH! What, did he think th' razor jus' HAPPENED to slip out of John's hands twice and just HAPPENED to cut his wrists/arms?! *rolls eyes* Idiot. But, yeah. Bittersweet.

Author's Response: lol, yeah, Carson, oh great teller of the obvious... but thanks for the review. Glad you liked it!
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
03 Oct 2005 9:51 pm
You're right, this *is* rather depressing. But it's so much more than that too. You really showed the depth of feeling John and Rodney shared, which was sweet and awe-inspiring; and I was sad that John couldn't carry on without Rodney, but also happy that they're together now. And I was also a little angry at his friends- why weren't they keeping a closer eye on him? They obviously knew about John and Rodney and they must have been able to see how he was struggling to cope...but then, they must have had their own grief to deal with and the running of Atlantis, so I could only be a little angry. This was excellently written. Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I was happy that you liked the fic. I thought about going into what the other members of Atlantis were doing/going through, but I really wanted this fic to be focused souly on John and his grief. The only reason I brought Liz in at the end was so that I wouldn't have a dead John soaking up the bath water and turning blue in my head. I was listening to that song one day and this fic just popped into my head... and I had to write it. I wanted it to be short and to the point. Glad you saw that I achieved that goal! Thanks again!
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