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Reviewer: Marissa (Anonymous)
25 Feb 2006 4:17 am
That was an amazing story! Greatly written, greatly thought out! Keep up the good work! :)
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Reviewer: Moonmoth (Anonymous)
30 Nov 2005 4:11 am
I really enjoyed the slow build, the misunderstandings, and then the final confrontation. I think the bitter sweet ending made it all the lovelier. Nice job!
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Reviewer: bluladyblu (Anonymous)
14 Oct 2005 4:36 pm
Think you did a great job with the relationships. This is how I would have envision their interaction. Again, great job
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Reviewer: Amalthia (Anonymous)
04 Oct 2005 7:50 pm
I really liked this story. :) it was great seeing events from Teyla's and John's pov. thanks for sharing.
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