Reviews For Live Bearing

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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
06 Apr 2008 6:54 am
Excellent AND educational! Yay!
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
13 Oct 2005 11:18 pm
Hee. I just loved John's mood swings as he was put out that Carson didn't come home, then confused about who the mother could be, and finally bemused and a little indignant that he'd been stood up for a mouse. *giggle* The jokes were bordering on the edge of 'so bad they're good' and I loved the byplay between John and Carson. The little bit of Rodney/Elizabeth teasing John was funny too. Laura.

Author's Response: [g] The silly mouse jokes were fun to write. And John would so be put out if he realized a mouse came before he did. Poor insecure boy. :) Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Jalabert (Signed)
13 Oct 2005 2:17 pm
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! Oh, and I enjoyed it very much, too! :)

Author's Response: Aw... thanks! :)
Reviewer: Tonia Barone (Signed)
13 Oct 2005 3:49 am
*L* Cute.

Author's Response: [g] Thanks. :)
Reviewer: Dr_Dredd (Signed)
13 Oct 2005 3:29 am
I had a good time imagining the look on John's face when he realized the mother was a mouse! (I'm not sure how I feel about her being named Rebekah, though. I've never eaten any of my young, and I can curse in at least 4 languages!) The jokes were lame but funny (liked the "epi-fur-al").

Author's Response: Sorry about that! I was actually thinking of a *very* different Rebekah when I named her that. Besides, Rebekah's such a good old fashioned Anglo name. :) But it's good to hear that you haven't eaten any of your young. And 'lame but funny' was exactly what I was going for, so Yay! :)
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous)
13 Oct 2005 2:57 am
This was a funny if a little bit disturbing. I actually liked John's jokes.

Author's Response: Funny but disturbing - exactly the way I intended it to be, so thanks! I've been asked where I got John's jokes about the mice... I have to admit to making them up entirely. I don't think there's a repository of bad mouse jokes out there to steal from. So, you know, if this is what I come up with for him, you can imagine what my friends think of me. :)