Reviews For Time Flies

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Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous)
25 Oct 2005 11:53 pm
Girl, I absolutely love this story and wish you'd write a sequel to it. It's so wonderfully written and John is so cute as a parakeet. *sigh* And the ending was great too...
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
23 Oct 2005 2:56 am
Ahhh! :D Once again you have shocked a smile out of me. You know, this is a side note, I have always wanted to know why the ancient wanted to be intimate with John. Maybe she wanted to have a child. What other reason, besides physical pleasure, could there be? It would be interesting to have the team find a little one running around when they got there. Don't listen to me if you already have something established, but it would be an interesting read.---Your loyal fan, Susan.
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
22 Oct 2005 9:00 am
Okay, you have a great story and your summary is, In a Bar. Come on! You wrote this great fic, and that is your way of getting them to read it. Use that artistic talent of yours and write a great summary to get more people to read. It is your duty as the owner of a great fic.

Author's Response: Okay, I changed the summary, I hope it works, and gets more people to read it. Thanks for giving me the motivation, plus I fixed the title that was driving me nuts.
Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
22 Oct 2005 8:54 am
OH MY GOD! That was such an awsome fic. Stories usually have to have a higher rating to get me to read them, but I'm glad that I read yours for the hell of it. I mean, wow. Oh, my gosh, every chapter's end blew me away. Oh, please, write more. You have to. That was so good. The birds, the animals gathering to the device, it was all so good. Okay, now I'm blabbering. That was an awsome fic!!!!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you. Don't worry there's five more parts to this, I'm just putting them up slowly.