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Reviewer: Drakcir (Signed)
09 Nov 2005 6:48 pm
Awwwww, that last line was just.... awwwwwwwww. It was beautiful, and I'd really love you to write more. Please write more!!!

Author's Response: Well, I've been writing 'more' in general. But I think this is going to stay as it is. Just recently I did "Drowning or the Lack Thereof" and added a new part of "Human Body". Glad you liked it so much!
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Reviewer: jo (Anonymous)
30 Oct 2005 12:30 pm
*AWWwwwww!! ::grasps chest as heart cracks:: That was so beautiful!! Even though John and Carson are together as are Radek and Rodney you can sense that John and Rodneys relationship is more a brotherly best friend one rather than just team mates and colleages!! I Soooo need a sequel to this, about Rodneys recovery and the friendships between the two couples, if you get a free minute!! It was so sweet! Thank you for suggesting I read it! :) jo. x

Author's Response: Just because I'm not a John/Rodney slasher, doesn't mean that I don't think that there are some intense feelings between them. You can't go through what they go through day after day with someone without some serious affection growing - even if it's not sexual. As for a sequel... I don't know. It was kind of meant to stand alone, but if something drives me I may do a follow up. Just don't hold your breath, okay? Glad you liked it.
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Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
20 Oct 2005 12:57 am
Yeah, I would love to see you return to this. I want to find out what the cause of the virus was, and if it adversely affected Rodney for the long term. Also, 41 degrees?! Normal body temp is around 98.6°F. Anything over 105° for long periods of time, like you said in the story, can be fatal... or at the very least cause nasty brain damage. Just an FYI for ya, just in case. :) Still, well done, this story. Don't see too many Shep/Beckett fics out there. ----}-@ Krys

Author's Response: Yeah, I did the research (on the internet, which means it's not infalible, but that's what I got.) I wanted it incredibly high, but not certain to be lethal. *shrug* I'm certainly not a doctor, so... :) And it's so funny how often I hear "gee there's not much Sheppard/Beckett" and yet no one seems to be writing it! :) Glad you liked the story.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
15 Oct 2005 2:34 pm
Poor Rodney :(. I'm glad he made it through the night. I thought you did anexcellent job with Radek, John and Carson's concern, how Carson took John aside to tell him about Rodney and how they both knew Radek wasn't moving, plus how John just stood with Radek, not trying to talk to him, just offering support. The same could be said of Carson and John too. Very nice. Laura.

Author's Response: Hee, it's probably sick and twisted that I'm glad I actually had you worried about which way it would go... but I am. ;) Thanks!
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Reviewer: Jaws (Anonymous)
15 Oct 2005 9:25 am
Very nice . . . but I think you could have written more, it is such a good premise and the characters were well done . . . If not more for this story diffently more of this nature . . . Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the story. I know it's kind of sketchy - I was trying something new. It's pretty hard to shut me up. Under 2000 words is a drabble for me, so I was being a little economical with the details... largely to see if I *could*. :) Thanks for the great feedback.
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