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Reviewer: libelluledargent (Anonymous)
15 Jan 2010 4:06 am
Since I do like the beginning I decided to copy paste up until the part I didn't like began. Weird never done that before. Wow, how I missed all the spelling mistakes when I first read this fic I have no idea! I couldn't believe how long it took to spell check it. Just sayin'
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Reviewer: libelluledargent (Anonymous)
09 Jan 2010 9:06 pm
I really liked the beginning the whole striking a bargain w/Cowen that he so did not want to do. I loved the idea that Cowen found John so attractive he came up with this plan. Definitely hit some of my kinks. And, I absolutely want Rodney to be the one to show John how sex can be good with a man. That Rodney will be there for John and do whatever John needs to feel better. Since john/rodney is my OTP, of course I want them to end up together. BUT, I do agree with most of what the anonymous reviewer said. It was like rodney was doing everything he SHOULDN'T be doing to help John recover.
1st he tells John he's beautiful in their *first* conversation after rodney realizes what happened to John! After John's been told that repeatedly by Cowen and hated it.
I think repeating what Cowen said, "you're beautiful" is the *last* thing John needed to hear.
And he does a lot of other things that Cowen did biting his nipple?? he touches him in similar ways without asking permission first. I can't believe John didn't deck him just out of pure reflex.Shower sex esp when John is sick. I mean John is *really* ill, with an infection he apparently got having sex with Cowen. Why is rodney molesting (and that's what he's doing) a very ill man whom he professes to love. At the end he and john have sex and rodney asks John to *bottom* after what he's been through? Are you kidding me? Then he asks if it's ok to stay inside John afterwards. Isn't that what Cowen forced upon John (and he hated it)I see you were going for if Rodney does the same things it'll help John recover. I think rodney helping john sexually is ok as long as there are certain parameters and I would hope bring my OTP together forever.However, even though you can quibble over whether john was raped or not, the experience *was* traumatic.If Rodney and John had worked with Carson, Heightmeyer and taken things as slowly as necessary that would've been the way to go.
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Reviewer: Space1Traveler (Anonymous)
10 Jul 2008 3:18 am
I was going to put down my favorite lines but stopped when I realized I had 1/3 of the page highlighted (LOL).

From the point when Rodney tels John that he is beautiful and its okay to be that way, I began to cry (6 hankie level). After that Rodney's (your) words just covered me with insight.

Its an understatement to say I liked/loved this fic.

Okay, and the love making between Rodney and John was WHOA BABY and yet so very sweet too.

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and writing talent with me through this story.
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Reviewer: Xelena (Anonymous)
17 Feb 2006 1:33 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
23 Dec 2005 3:16 am
This was fucked up. I was completely with you for the first few chapters, until McKay started coming on to John so strongly. That's where it lost credibility for me. If we're meant to buy Rodney as Sheppard's link to normalcy - which works splendidly - then having him seduce the Major doesn't really fly. As a health professional and former counselor, I was cringing, thinking of 1) a person being violated, 2) nearly dying from an infection from that violation, and 3) his best friend taking advantage and screwing him (while he's still sick, no less) to make it all better 4) Beckett supplying him with the lube. Unh-uh. Fucked up. I was really looking forward to the comfort portion of this h/c, too. :|
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
16 Mar 2005 5:13 pm
I loved this. You've got to admire Sheppard for striking the deal, even knowing what Cowen wanted. That's taking job dedication to a new level! I was pleased to see that Beckett figured things out so quickly and was able to help John without freaking him too much. Rodney was great though; he knew just when John needed normal banter or some comfort or a good talking to. I'm glad they got together in the end.
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Reviewer: slashbluegreen (Anonymous)
28 Feb 2005 11:56 pm
meep :-) fevered Sheppard getting fucked for a livetime supply of coffee beans... verrry nice image. thanks for this delicious story!
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