Reviews For The Enemy Within

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Reviewer: Tonia Barone (Signed)
03 Nov 2005 5:19 am
*blinks* Damn. Good fic. Poor Shep. Poor Carson. Go Rodney! *pouts* But curse you for making Kavanagh vaguely likable. *huffs* Well, maybe not. You managed to keep everyone relatively in character and it WAS pretty amusing seeing everyone fuss over John. But Kavanagh? I don't wanna sympathize with him, demmit. Why much all you really good writers make him a semi-good guy? Serously, though, thanks for this.

Author's Response: Well you know on the Kav front, I blame sgatlatnislight - I was perfectly happy to hate Kav myself, but she made me like him! So blame her :p I am glad however you liked the fic, I was pulling my hair out with this one lol, so I'm glad it has been so well recieved. Carson and John were so hard to do, because of all the emotional baggage, but I'm really glad it worked. *hugs*
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Reviewer: wisewander (Anonymous)
03 Nov 2005 2:34 am
This was a great story and the whole wraith baby thing was very inventive. I am hoping for a sequal, to see if John and Carson patch things up. Was that him talking softly to John at the end. Do they find out what the wraith were up to? Really want to know these things please.

Author's Response: I was concidering a sequal and originally yes the idea was that it would be Carson at the end, but then I changed my mind, so if I do write a sequal it won't be Carson, becuz I had another slightly cooler idea. But we'll just ahve to see if I can find time to put pen to paper. Either way I'm glad you liked this fic and I hope if I have time to pen a sqeual you won't be disappointed. *Hugs*
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