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Reviewer: Emely Raines (Anonymous)
07 Nov 2005 1:29 am
very hot. I love Weir's thought process throughout, because, I'm sorry, you don't think purely of sex and wantoness during sex, your mind wanders unless you have a really really good partner. I love the last paragraph, very powerful.
Reviewer: lillyjk (Signed)
07 Nov 2005 12:33 am
very nice. can't wait to read more of your work
Reviewer: megan (Anonymous)
06 Nov 2005 11:08 pm
I loved that last line. It kinda put a twist on my perspective of the story.
Reviewer: megan (Anonymous)
06 Nov 2005 11:07 pm
I loved that last line. It kinda put a twist on my perspective of the story.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
06 Nov 2005 6:54 pm
Oh, that was hot. I liked how the style of this really drew me into Elizabeth's experiences and emotions. The ending though, with just that little bit of angsty bittersweetness was very good and a nice twist. Though I'd love to see the circumstances change and John and Rodney feel free to make love to each other as well as Elizabeth. Laura.
Reviewer: Lee Michelle (Anonymous)
06 Nov 2005 4:11 pm
Wow very good, no need to be nervous at all. I'd like very much to read more.Thanks
Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous)
06 Nov 2005 3:27 pm
Oh! This definately needs to be continued. Please?
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