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Reviewer: ladyjanus (Signed)
02 Nov 2009 9:48 pm
Nice work, good flow to the narrative. I love this kind of short story, brief yet with a completeness to the beginning and the ending. A very satisfying sort of canape-read. Extra points for using "albeit..."
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
09 Nov 2005 11:52 pm
Wow, hot, but also very sweet and tender. It's good that Rodney seems to know the exact moment that John's thoughts get too much for him, knows just when John's about to bolt. I also liked that there wasn't any dialogue and yet we still got the depth of emotion just from their actions. Laura.

Author's Response: thanks babe, glad you liked it
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Reviewer: starfox (Anonymous)
09 Nov 2005 7:27 pm
beautifully sexy...emphasis on the beautiful

Author's Response: thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it
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