Reviews For The Sacrifice
This story is fantastic!
totally cool. i really like this story.
Reviewer: kamadi (Anonymous)
18 Jul 2006 2:40 pm
Fantastic work, I think I read your story for the 5 time now and it just keeps getting better and better (hence the review:)..)I would love for another story about Koyla and John, because you are right there is a certain degree of 'chemical connection'between the two. I would love to read more about such a relationship.......Carson/Sheppard or Mckay/Sheppard are also welcome,....with the way you write you may pair up everybody, I'm certain that you would make a wonderful story about it. You are a truly gifted writer, Thank you for posting it.
Reviewer: brel (Anonymous)
10 Jun 2006 3:09 am
Very tense story. And a McKay who is strong enough to let friendship be enough.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
23 Dec 2005 6:04 am
Pausing to note that I'm hooked. One thing: Hon, if Shep kicked Kolya solidly in the groin, Kolya wouldn't be hard so soon afterward.
Reviewer: MizDarcy1060@cox.net (Anonymous)
02 Nov 2005 2:57 am
Loved it, loved it!! Waiting for more, Darcy:)
Reviewer: Xelena (Anonymous)
18 Sep 2005 2:02 pm
that was awesome. despite the fact that there's no romance or love because it's non-con, it was still a really good read. and the plot's interesting.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
15 Mar 2005 8:42 pm
This was excellent! The rape scenes were harrowing, but I loved seeing John so determined not to let Kolya break him. I was pleased when John finally got the upper hand and killed Kolya. The aftermath was nicely handled too; with the mood swings, constant cleaning and not wanting to be touched by anyone. I was pleased that there wasn't a quick fix. I felt a little sorry for Carson, he was only trying to do his best for John, but I also think he handled it badly and will have to work for John's trust. I have to say a big "yay" for Rodney though- I don't think John would have done half so well without him. It helped that he had some experience in this from his sister's ordeal. I'd love to see a follow up to this...where John tells Rodney about the raider- that must have hit him hard after his experiences with Kolya :(. And I'd love to hear how Rodney answers John's "why me?" comment- he could potentially let his feelings slip...which would give us another great story. How would John react to this? Would he freak out that he now has Rodney added to the list of men who want him, or would he welcome this revelation? I hope you will consider a follow up in the future. Laura.
Reviewer: Char (Anonymous)
06 Mar 2005 12:39 am