Really good. I like the way you told the story from different POVs thru Kate.
Author's Response: Thanks! The first draft didn't have that, and as I pondered how I could add in some stuff that I felt needed to be there, I had a 'Doh!' moment as I realized that Kate had already done all of the other interviews, so already had that information.
Reviews For Separate Salt from Sand
Reviewer: mandy (Anonymous)
17 Nov 2005 1:48 am