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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
19 Nov 2005 2:55 am
Oh ::adds to favourites:: I loved this. The gradual deepening of their relationship was great and I liked how the armoury and target practice grew to mean so much more than simple practice, and how the instructions John gave Rodney to improve his stance and such came to be so much more than simple instructions too. I was so glad that Bates got taken down a peg or two (hundred *g*), I especially liked the ending, where they leave condom wrapers for Bates to find *heee*. This was a really interesting look at John and Rodney much of their interaction is all snark and bickering, so this, with so much silence and just the minimum few words to offer comfort or instruction, was a very interesting take on them. And that one moment, when John arrived at the armoury after beaming back from the Daedalus...that was very tense. I didn't believe Rodney would do it, but there was that tiny sliver of doubt after seeing how dead and empty he felt, and that John also feared that single shot made it so much worse. I loved that they finally acknowledged what was between them, it was hot and sweet, and I liked the way the sex mirrored the target practice with the quietness so different from their normal, public faces. Great story. Laura.

Author's Response: Wow - thanks so much for the lovely, detailed feedback. I'm glad the silence worked for you and that the target practice was a good build-up. I really appreciate the feedback. Thanks!!
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Reviewer: lilad (Signed)
19 Nov 2005 1:48 am
Love it!

Author's Response: Glad to hear it! Thanks.
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Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
18 Nov 2005 9:05 pm
*snicker* Bates-baiting. Love it! What a fantastic story. Exquisitely written. Can't say more, other than I friggin loved this. ----}-@ Krys

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. And Bates is just kind of easy to pick on. Really.
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