Reviews For On a Mission

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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
17 Feb 2008 11:03 pm
Great beginning, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I wouldn't hold my breath. I had to abandon this fic.rnrnZari
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Reviewer: Elina (Anonymous)
08 Dec 2005 6:33 pm
Interesting start. I can't wait to see what Carson comes up with. Perhaps the fact that he usually isn't portrayed as the "a man on a mission"-type makes this even more intriguing because you can sense that he really means it. So, waiting for more. And Cadman, heh. Though, a piece of constructive critisism, if you don't mind: get rid of the epithets. There's no reason why you can't just call them by their names - it's not repetitive. Trust me, people will find it a lot less distracting.

Author's Response: Thanks. This was just a random idea that entered into my head and demanded to be written. I will look into what you suggested Azar
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Reviewer: dark cygnet (Anonymous)
05 Dec 2005 6:23 pm
nice start, can't wait to see whats next!

Author's Response: Thanks.
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Reviewer: Jaws (Anonymous)
04 Dec 2005 1:28 am
Should be an interesting part two ;) can't wait

Author's Response: Thanks.
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Reviewer: Angyl~ (Anonymous)
03 Dec 2005 7:00 pm
Ooooh, I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks.
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Reviewer: Dr_Dredd (Signed)
03 Dec 2005 6:29 pm
I love Carson getting all James Bond-like. (Hey, Paul McG and Sean Connery are both Scottish, so why not? :-) ) Your portrayals of Cadman and Zelenka are also funny -- her swearing on her iPod and him just plain swearing!

Author's Response: That is true. They both are from Scotland. That is just the way I just picture Cadman and Zelenka.
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Reviewer: Tonia Barone (Signed)
03 Dec 2005 5:08 pm
Ooooo....looks like this is gonna be good! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Um... I have no idea when the next part will be out. I have finals starting next week.
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