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Reviewer: Haggy (Anonymous)
07 Apr 2006 3:45 pm
really liked this :)
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Reviewer: Keegan (Signed)
15 Feb 2006 11:04 am
That was so nice! I really loved Ronon's thoughts and the story about his past. Great job, great story! Thank you!
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Reviewer: Buggin3 (Anonymous)
02 Jan 2006 1:15 am
More please. Great story!
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Reviewer: Jake (Anonymous)
13 Dec 2005 3:18 pm
Nice! More Please!
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Reviewer: Sylvanwitch (Anonymous)
03 Dec 2005 9:08 pm
I really, really like this. It has a comfortable, established tone to it, as though you've been thinking about the way these two characters interact for a long time. I also appreciate the structure--the vignettes give us a snapshot, a feeling, an intimation, and then we're whisked on to the next part of the main action of the story. Bravo! And please: write more!
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
03 Dec 2005 7:26 pm
I liked this. Nice exploration of Ronon's character and background and how he's trying to learn the Atlantis rules. I liked his interactions with John too. Laura.
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Reviewer: Anne11 (Anonymous)
03 Dec 2005 4:23 pm
You know I almost didn't read this because when I saw the genre was "challenge" I thought it was just somebody making a challenge the way it usually is when people just use that one descriptor. But I'm glad I clicked on this because it was a story I really enjoyed. :)
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