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Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
06 Dec 2005 6:15 am
Great good goad damn. What would be friggin awesome would be a sequel to this with Rodney showing John exactly how good his touch can be. After they recover from the Hive. Y'know? ;) ----}-@ Krys

Author's Response: thanks - I'm actually sort of debating about writing a sequel of sorts...but I'm not writing anything new until I wrap up my current series.
Reviewer: Leah (Signed)
05 Dec 2005 3:12 am
Very, very nice. Loved the imagery, and John turning it all over in his mind, and how you had him sculpt lies to himself so he could keep up pretenses. The ending was just riveting.

Author's Response: thanks so much...I could just imagine John working so hard to delude himself. glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
04 Dec 2005 10:42 pm
I liked this. I loved how John marked time by touches and how he catalogued them all. Sad at the end though, with the touch being the wrong one and his time with Rodney missed :(. Laura.

Author's Response: yeah - this was another angsty one, but hopefully John will make up for all that lost time...