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Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
06 Dec 2005 12:06 am
Wow. Very deep and powerful. I was THIS close to crying too! Great job. ----}-@ Krys

Author's Response: Thanks!..Well I was crying when I was writing and it is only responsible for me to share the tears! hehe
4. Restoration
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
05 Dec 2005 5:13 am
Yay, happy ending *vbg*. I loved that they *really* talked about things and made each other understand why they had acted as they had. This close call can only make them stronger IMO, now that they understand that the emotional side can't be brushed away, that they will have to talk to each other more. Loved the make up sex, hot :). Laura.

Author's Response: Yes I am all about the happy endings!! :o) I am a firm believer in that you can't go back and fix things, you have to move on and make the future better and different! I am glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! ;o) Jo. x
4. Restoration
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
05 Dec 2005 5:02 am
Ow ow ow :(. Painful chapter. It was so sad to hear Rodney's ramblings and then seeing the effect they had on John. I just hope John's managed to get through to Rodney, because it looks like they'll lose them both otherwise :(. Laura.

Author's Response: This was actually a painful chapter to write too!I wanted it to show that John wasn't always the strong one and he could break too, I like to think it worked. :o) Thanks for reading
3. Remembering.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
05 Dec 2005 4:49 am
Missing? *meep*. It was great seeing their relationship from John's pov this time as he relived it over and over. I especially liked John's thoughts about Rodney's eyes, how they gave everything away, and how they'd been different after Ford. I hope John finds Rodney quickly. Laura.

Author's Response: :o) Thanks..Yeah Rodney's eyes are really expressive..well to me anyway, it really annoys me when others can't see whats in them, so of course I had to fix that...
2. Realization
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
05 Dec 2005 4:41 am
Great, though sad, start. Poor guys. I liked Rodney's reflections on those lost and how ultimately it didn't matter whether he'd known them well or not. I think that the soul mates thing made this break up even worse. Even after all the lost trust on both sides, it was sad to see how much they were both hurting and hurting each other. Can't wait for this to be fixed ;). Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks!...The soul mates line was actually what started the fic off!
1. Reflection
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