Reviews For Buoyancy
11 Dec 2005 7:59 pm
I see the flickering light playing off the water while John strokes smoothly down and back, the length of the pool. Such a sensuous picture with all the feelings that go with it, I can't imagine Rodney resisting for long. It was wonderful to be a voyeur of this private moment in such a delightful venue.
And do wondrous things to Sheppard in said water. *hums happily* Really love your writing style. ----}-@ Krys
Wonderful fic. Thanks ever so much for this! *nod nod*
Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous)
05 Dec 2005 4:04 pm
I remember reading this during the swimming challenge and I love it as much now as I did then! I know it's meant as a stand-alone vignette, but I would love ever so much to see John help Rodney learn how to swim. The ankle touching was such a delicious tease.
Yes, if ever there was an incentive to learn to swim, living in a place surrounded by ocean, and having John as a potential swimming teacher is definitely it :). Laura.