Interesting start. I liked Elizabeth searching for the old John in his eyes, but only seeing the locked down version there. I also liked the way John kept reading bits of the address line even as he tried to do his paperwork and ignore the journal. Charley's description of the feeling he had going to Atlantis- likening it to the top of the roller coaster, or the first date, was a great image. Laura.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. I'm actually kinda cheating on this fic. After Hurricane Katrina, I was sent to New Orleans, and had to keep a diary for my uni english class. I'm (slowly) rewriting my journal as an Atlantis fic. Glad you like it.
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