Please, please, please, continue this story. It was funny with just a touch of sadness and longing that made it wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. When I wrote this, there was no intent of a sequel, but if it tickles my muse, there may be a sequel in the works sometime soon.
Reviews For Fated From the Start
Reviewer: REN (Anonymous)
15 Aug 2006 12:40 pm
Oh, nice and hot, but with that edge of loneliness too. I loved the last line, about their obliviousness to the fate awaiting them :). Laura.
Reviewer: wisenboi (Anonymous)
18 Dec 2005 3:58 pm
that was hot and sensual all at the same time in all major parts :). Hope to see a sequel coming out of this and their reactions to when they realize they're far from home together heh
*L* Hot. Cute. The ending is so funny I nearly died. Any chance of a continuation? How they react when things settle?
*hums happily* Closet sex can be quite fun. Amazing that those two managed to NOT get poked and prodded by the stupid objects that are inevitably left sticking out of their storage areas. *rubs small of back in remembrance* Now cars... *VBEG* Having sex in the drivers' seat of a car is extremely fun. *chuckle* Excellent job, m'dear. And sprinkled with just a hint of sadness and longing. Excellent writing. ----}-@ Krys
Reviewer: bonita7 (Anonymous)
18 Dec 2005 6:24 am
ooooh...I see a sequel. Once the pair are once in Atlantis they sooo need to discuss if that was a one-shot or the start of something. Be interesting to see where you take this. By the way, yes, I liked it.