Reviews For Nest-Building
That's a point that not many others make: Just how much actual combat has John seen? I've seen authors go the way of special ops training in his past, but I think this is the first that even considers the idea of him not having all that much combat experience. I liked how the team all tracked him down and just sat companionably. Very nice :). Laura.
Reviewer: anonymouse (Anonymous)
19 Dec 2005 6:17 am
Very nice mood piece. Thanks for writing it. A couple of things: 1) Rodney was cut on his right arm, so if it still hurt, he would use his left hand to pick up the LSD. Although Rodney is right handed, he does seem to hold the LSD in his left hand a lot, probably because he uses his right hand to fiddle with the buttons of the LSD, or for holding a flashlight or a gun. 2) The mainland is 20 minutes away by Puddlejumper, so that's a fair piece for that bird to be flying for a branch, even a giant bird in another galaxy. I like the bit about the branch being tossed up by the storm better.
Oh, what a wonderful team!fic. Comfortin' Shep instead of, say, Teyla or Rodney. Wonderful. Thanks for this.
Cool. Excellent tag to the Storm arc. I wondered how John would handle all the deaths he caused. Although I think he has a lot more experience with killing than most people think. He's sneaky that way... ;) ----}-@ Krys