I really love this song, and I think you did well mirroring it in rodney and carson's relationship.
However, it was kind of cheesy the way you delibrately worked the lyrics into the dialogue; it felt unnatural. Other than that it was great and I like how you emphasised the depth of the relationship. The verse you left out was my favourite : (
Reviews For I Will Follow You Into the Dark
Reviewer: miz (Anonymous)
04 Feb 2008 9:26 am
Oh my god, that was... *speechless* I really didn't expect that.