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Reviewer: Manic (Anonymous)
29 Nov 2006 9:55 am
I didn't think they were going back to the same planet. How did the family get ahold of him? Anyway, I enjoyed the story and charcterizations. Thank you.

Author's Response: Oh, I probably didn't make it clear enough. Sheppard and Ronon are on a different planet, not where The Incident took place. And the family was in the right place at the right time to take advantage of John's distraction. Thanks for the great review! JJ
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Reviewer: Dragonfly (Anonymous)
24 Jan 2006 9:32 pm
Ooh! Lovely! ...can we have more? lol

Author's Response: Hi, Dragonfly! Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. There will be no more for this story, but I'm sure I'll be writing in John's POV again in the future. FSA
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Reviewer: imskysmom (Anonymous)
24 Jan 2006 12:56 am
Ok, so that was scary good and I might just have to have Ronon kick your you know what for holding out on us on the list! So I'm gonna add you to my favorite authors and everytime you post something I'm announcing it on the board if you don't! HUMPH! You know the demand for good stories on the list and you're sitting here, being a really REALLY great Shep writer and holding out on us!! *whumps JJ* Have I ranted enough *grin* cause I really really REALLY liked this!

Author's Response: Thanks! Okay! I won't hold out on the list any more. I promise. I'm so glad you liked it. You know, me being shy and everything. ;.) Thanks for the review -- here and on the list!
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Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
03 Jan 2006 8:48 pm
Yeah, this is perfect as is. Really quite cool. And so John Sheppard, IMHO. Wondrously done, m'dear. ----}-@ Krys

Author's Response: Hi, again, Krys! Yeah, I tried to write a chapter 2, but it just didn't work out. Everything I added just seemed to take away from the 1st chapter. Whee! It was "cool?" Thanks for the review!
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
30 Dec 2005 6:41 pm
Oh, this is great. Will there be more? I'd love to see what happens next, see John mending fences. Still, I can see his point about just wanting to deal with things his own way and everyone's well meaning advice actually making things worse. I liked the backstory you gave John too, about the doctor who helped him through all his scrapes at the academy. Plus the whole killing an innocent idea was a good one. So yeah, I hope there's more, but if not, his decision to talk to Ronon is a great place to end. Laura.

Author's Response: Hi, Laura! Thanks for the review! I'm thinking of adding another chapter for the talk between Ronon and John. I'm still not sure which way I want to go with it. The killing of an innocent has been on my mind as a story for Sheppard since I watched the commentary for The Eye/The Storm and they talked about why they didn't have John more upset at killing the Genii. So, hopefully, there will be another chapter to this story with lots and lots of angst. Thanks, again!
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Reviewer: Emrys (Anonymous)
29 Dec 2005 11:52 pm
I really liked this! It was well written and, well, just great! Thanks for a wonderful story :) Emrys

Author's Response: Emrys: Thanks for the great review! I'm so glad you liked it! I wanted to write something with Ronon and John and this is what I ended up with.
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