Wraithbait

Love this fic. Have reread it a few times.

This was amazing!! Rodneys change from hopeful and bored to hopeless and yet surviving well, learning to bake etc was so subtle yet noticable it was great!! Also loved Johns speech T the funeral. Mabe me cry D=

as always, an amazing read!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

It's been far too long since I last read this :) You are one incredible writer...

Author's Response: Now you're just flattering me. :D

OMG that was fabulous. You even used non-American spelling for Rodney's journal! And oh, the angst, and the characterisation, and the final happy ending... it was perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

This is a truly amazing fic and I enjoyed it so much my overactive mind even started presenting a situation for an A/U of it where Rodney isn't found for five years and it is not SGA1 that found him. I you do not have any objection to me writing that A/U could you let me know. If you want to write it let me know and I will send you th full idea and the scenes that I have thought up.

Author's Response: Sorry for replying so late. I have no objection to you writing that story whatsoever. Please leave me a link when you're done. :)

I have read this story several times and I just have to say awesome!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

I've read this story many times and I realised I've never commented on it, so I'm doing that now.
I just wanted to let you know that I really like this story a lot and will continue to re-read it :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much, sweetness! :)

I finally, finally finished reading this (13 chapters in one go after I needed 3 weeks for the first ones *g*), and it was absolutely worth it (which really isn't a surprise). I love Robinson-Crusoe-ish stories, especially when the PoV of the ones left behind is also written, so BNTN was perfect for me *g* I might have squealed loudly when they eventually discover Rodney, and there might have been teary eyes at the end *coughs*

Great story. I really enjoyed reading. Technically and all, it's surely not your best, but this story offers everything from angst over sex to romance AND has a beautiful, descriptive language (for which I only rarely needed a dictionary), which absolutely makes up for teeny-tiny plotholes and the spelling of "Ronan" *g*


I had a great time and a lot of fun reading *huggles*

Author's Response: *laughs* This is both one of my best and worst stories. It's certainly got drama and a lot of emotion, but so many flaws! :D Still, I'm glad you liked it, sweetness. *snuggles*

As i read i was making notes to comment on, like what happened to his radio, how the tree cycle is amazing, the reservoir a better idea than filling a tub w/ water from a well and heating it, how yeah, i don't think anyone likes elizabeth, how come there were no weapons in the dart, not even a wraith weapon, that the wraith would've eaten him, runner comment or no, b/c it was probably starving, so didn't Rodney get lucky, that a planet with no moon must have a boring ocean w/ no waves, that rodney was allergic to the lilies and yet it states later he never had a problem w/ pollen b/f, that i finally get it and his sister is au and so is older, that someone really should check on the outpost village, that rodney probably got though the worst of his caffeine withdrawal when he was sickly and no doubt really misses coffee. and i just couldn't stop! so yeah, sorry for all that gibberish but I'm posting it anyway, b/c really, i like the story a lot and its a weird way of letting you know, but....
and i can just guess that all those aforementioned facts are address later. you'd think i'd learn not to jump the gun after my previous posts...

Author's Response: I'm not entirely sure why you're reading this, actually. Yes, this could do with a major rewrite. No, I won't actually rewrite it. But I hope you had fun nitpicking, i fnothing else.

LOL! Okay, so yes, mention the Morse Code thing. It might still work *sniff* Now that plot holes are getting filled in, the story is more fun to ready :D
As for the town, there is no where it is the only one on the planet. Unless the natives have several factories nearby to make the bottles, jars, pills, packaging, etc. And how close are the trees to the town? Is there nothing but snow and hills around. I like to imagin great forests everywhere to get firewood. As for the animals, they ran off through the gate :P
Just teasing. I like the story a lot actually ^^
But yeah, John was right. Loosing Radek too would be bad. Maybe Kavanagh should be the replacement.... *evil laughter*

Author's Response: And yet you're still taking delight in pointing out each and every one of those plot holes, aren't you? *g* Perhaps the natives were trading for packaging. Or, hey, perhaps it was an outpost. Perhaps there really is nothing but snow and hills and woods (which would be like my own hometown looks, actually). As for the animals, Rodney didn't see any yet. That doesn't mean they're not there.

HA! yeah, called it a bit soon, but come on? can't remember a single address? how convenient, eh? ;)
Did the Athosian's make the coffin? I like to think that none of the food contained citrus at the wake. :D

Author's Response: Very convenient indeed. I'm sure the coffin was imported and/or stashed, like the one we saw in Sunday. But yeah, there probably wasn't any citrus.

funny i always thought that McKay was older and had a younger sister. Which is why Rodney got a female name. Because his parents wanted a girl.
As for being stuck on the planet, somehow i think, even with the fever and everything else, Rodney would think to dial an allies' address where he could get medical attention and use the GDO assigned to the planet's natives to call home. But that's just me.
I love the little generator ^^

Author's Response: This was actually written before McKay & Mrs. Miller was aired, you know.

Amazing how Rodney never thought to go and gather rocks to send through the gate so they will bounce off the shield in a Morse Code pattern. SOS - McKay or whatever. I mean, after all, how many others, besides people from Earth, would know Morse Code anyway?

Author's Response: How would he know that the shield was down? And as far as I was aware, Atlantis can't see who's dialling in, so how would they know where to go?

Its an amazing story. I love how you deal with Rodney's loneliness and John's grief.

Author's Response: Thank you, love. :)

*hugs you* Grargh! *tries to formulate a better compliment than that* ... *fails* ...

Author's Response: Hee, thank you! *snuggles*

Graaa... this is awesome and so in character.

Author's Response: Ahaha, you think? Thank you very much.

Someone did a fic!search!request and I thought it sounded like a good read and-- I was right.
I love being right. *goes to read more*

Author's Response: Why, thank you! :D

So it's 2 in the morning and I've just finished reading your story straight through. Why? Because it was so good I couldn't stop reading it. *grin* Honestly, you did a fantastic job with it. I loved the complete breakdown of the characters, from the despair to the loneliness, to the hope and joy of reunion. Absolutely wonderful!!

Good job.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I imagine your eyes are somewhat gritty now. *is impressed*

I can't seem to stop crying T_T

Author's Response: Uh. Sorry?

one word:
breathtaking
*awed*

Author's Response: Thank you! :)