Wraithbait

Great good god famn, but this is fucking brilliant. I so can't wait to read the next chapter! More soon? Please? ----}-@ Krys

Author's Response: gah, easy with the flattery. *blush* thank you very much for your kind review. i will update soon. promise. :)

Great start, looking forward to the update very much!

Author's Response: thank you! :)

Oh! ::is speechless:: This is an excellent start. Rodney's bleak dilemma is alarming. I'm glad he's not been fed on, or at least, not enough to make a difference to his appearance, but this endless snow is a worry, even for someone who's lived in Canada, Siberia and Antarctica to deal with. Still, this is Rodney, and he's nothing if not stubbornly determined! I think you've handled John and the team's grief well too. It seems very in character that they stave off the tears, try to maintain the professional appearance for the rest of the city. Particularly good job with John as he struggles to keep himself together and winds up on Rodney's bed. Very sad to see him so lost. I can't wait to see what happens next on both fronts, and hope that Rodney won't be away from them for too long. Laura.

Author's Response: i think rodney being culled is among the worst things you could do to the poor guy - and then dropping him off in the middle of nowhere. he IS nothing if not determined, right, but he also often looks at others for support or a direction, subconsciously i think. as for john, i still haven't forgiven him for "trinity", or "aurora", for that matter. so i'm punishing him. a little. he deserves it. *nod*

Oh, break my heart, why don't ya? The briefing worked well, with everyone there and just trying to get through it without breaking down. And John crying in Rodney's bed was a very powerful image. You made me tear up here. I can't wait until you post the next part.

Author's Response: i like that one. i think there are few images that describe "lost" as well as somebody seeking emotional closeness by touching another's belongings. or sleeping in their bed. it's the underlying helplessness that gets me every time. :)

Ohh more please. This is great. I love the angst and drama. You have captured it so well. Looking forward to the next chapter...soon I hope :D

Author's Response: angst is my life. ;) and yes, the next part will be coming soon.

Amazing... Cannot wait for Day 2.

Author's Response: thank you. :)

Oh my god. What is going to happen to Rodney? I can't wait to read more. And John and Atlantis--how are the going to cope? Write soon.

Author's Response: i'm going to put him through the wringer, of course. *evil grin* and john as well. it's what i do. ;)

Oh good GOD and I started reading this thinking it was complete . . . UPDATE ALREADY!!!! *wrings hands*

Author's Response: uh, that's why it says it isn't finished? because it isn't? ;) although, if you start reading this thinking it was complete, i suppose it's one hell of a cliffhanger. uhm, sorry for that.

AAGGGHH! More! Need more NOW! blinkblink...*ahem* (blushes) Ah, yes, well, what I really meant to say was, "Damn fine job!" I am seriously in love with this fic and I'm going to be on pins and needles, Pins and Needles, do ya hear?!? Til this one is finished. Gah! I'm so in love with this I can't keep a coherent thought in my head. Oh well, this will have to do. Oh! And Thanky!

Author's Response: well, i suppose i could be bought, but i didn't plan on posting another part till next week. still, i'm glad you like what i wrote so far. hope you'll love the other parts as well. :)

I can't wait for day two!!! PLease Hurry and get me day 2! and Day 3 if there's going to be one! This is escellent and I would really love to read more! THanks for the first of what's bound to be a great fic!

Author's Response: yes, there's going to be a day three. and some more, actually. i hope you'll keep reading, then you'll see. :)

See, now, that is powerful writing. Sheeeesh! What are you trying to do? Make me cry?! If so, then, close enough! :)

Author's Response: honestly? yes, i am. tell me if i manage to. ;) and as always, thanks for reviewing!

Oh my poor poor Rodney! Please add more wonderful chapters soon!

Author's Response: i thought weekly? if that's enough? that story is hell to write, seriously.

Extremely good start! I'm glad you didn't attempt Carson's accent again - it was much less distracting this way! Poor Rodney. Poor John. I'm looking forward to seeing how Rodney gets out of this one (assuming he does!).

Author's Response: yeah, well, you were right, it just sounded too stressed. this works way better. :) and thank you very much for your review!

Good start! ... and I really like the idea of Rodney with a long black wraith leather coat... Ansonsten: Will mehr lesen!!

Author's Response: *lol* who doesn't? ansonsten: kein problem. nächste woche. :)

Wow. I think I'm going to cry too. This is a really good story. Can't wait for the next part!

Author's Response: thank you, that's really appreciated. :)