Reviews For Pacing the Cage

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Reviewer: Lavonya (Signed)
14 Oct 2013 8:20 am
Poor John...
Reviewer: Ayano (Anonymous)
22 May 2007 10:23 pm
I want a sequal please my friend!

Ah this is wonderful. What little dialogue there is is still terrificly in character, and I love the description of the creepy village people. Heh, who knew chewing on a vine could save your life, eh? It's rather convienient!

Lol, amazing story, I loved it ver much. Thank you for writing it!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: haggy (Anonymous)
07 Apr 2006 8:09 pm
hot very very hot :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. :D
Reviewer: Buggin3 (Anonymous)
28 Jan 2006 4:03 pm
This was so hot I had to turn on my fan to finish it! WOW! Great job, more please.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I haven't written tons of SGA, but there is much more fic at my website ( and at my livejournal ( Thanks for the kind words! :D
Reviewer: SylvanWitch (Anonymous)
10 Jan 2006 5:28 am
Ah, hot and hot again! I like the characterization and the fact that you build up to a relationship. I also love the whole idea of the holiday party. Bravo!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The party was so much fun to write. :D
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
05 Jan 2006 12:54 am
I liked this. Firstly, it's great to see some more John/Ronon hotness...which this was. I loved the whole party, but the aftermath with John 'helping Ronon back to his room' was the highlight. It was a shame to see how their working relationship faltered after that though, even after John tried to talk about it with Ronon. John's time in the cage was worrying, firstly because I didn't know what the natives were planning, then there was the rest of the team and their whereabouts. I thought you did a great job with John's mixed reactions and thoughts as he sat there waiting for rescue and then trying to chew his way out. I was very relieved that Ronon appeared and got him free, though not so glad that he trod on something poisonous :(. Still, he's almost better now and the incident made Ronon come to his senses. More hotness in the infirmary, made hotter by the fact that they could have been found at any moment :). Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I have a fondness for stories where the characters hook up for some great - but totally ill-advised - sex at the beginning, and then have to figure out how to deal with the aftermath.
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