Reviews For The Presents Universe
Reviewer: McShep Fanboy (Anonymous)
19 May 2006 9:11 pm
That cat is pure evil! I love it. great story.
Reviewer: Juniper Holly (Anonymous)
18 May 2006 12:11 pm
I like this series, it's incredibly funny. Kirk is squeal-inducingly cute too. You've got your characters more or less on par as well...except for Rodney. Rodney is becoming increasingly unstable and emotional in relation to his cat. I think you're doing this for the comic relief, and it is really funny, but it's also becoming a little unbelievable. Maybe try to create some balance in his character over the next several chapters as the newness of Kirk wears off.
*snort* Oh how I love Kirk. Very cute story! ^_^
Reviewer: Tracy (Anonymous)
13 Jan 2006 6:41 pm
Is that the end to the story because I really like it and it would be nice to read more.
HOWL!!! Don't tell me Kirk has the feline equivalent of the ATA gene?! ROTFLMFAO I think it totally makes sense that the Ancients would've had pets, and that they probably had the city programmed to respond to certain cues from said pets... like say... meowing when one needs to use the litter pan that happens to be in another room? ;) I giggled this entire chapter. Thanks! ----}-@ Krys
this is cute. really, really cute. :) i liked the part with the boxed meal. "it's just dinner". *lol*
Oh yeah. Perfection. *happy sigh* They SO need at least one cat on Atlantis. Something's gotta terrorize Carson's mice! ;) ----}-@ Krys