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Reviews For I'm Not Broken

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Reviewer: Mary Christmas (Anonymous)
18 Jan 2006 8:30 pm
Fascinating story. It was a bit fast paced, and it seemed to be telling rather than showing what happened. I would have liked to have seen more scenes of him on Earth, and his reactions to his surroundings as well as more on Atlantis with what was happening with him for him to get to the state he was in. Overall it was an enjoyable story, and I compliment you on turning what could have been a cliched storyline into an original concept.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting, yes I know I asked you to, but thank you. I guess I'm going to have to learn to write a story that shows more than it tells. Something to practice on anyways. Yay it wasn't cliched! Quite the compliment.
Reviewer: bea (Anonymous)
15 Jan 2006 5:47 pm
very promising. good story line.

Author's Response: Thank you.
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