Wraithbait

Nooo, it wasn't a vision...was it? Rodney was watching him after the steam room.

I loved the tone of this, how the writing really reflected that langourous, slow feeling.

Laura.

Good visions John had. :) A wonderful feeling story. You can feel the heat from the lodge. John's want and confusion.

Oh, don't lock it away. Poor John. To want so badly..... Nicely done!

Holy mother of guh! So hot ::fans self:: Ok, the shipper in me votes for the whole thing being real because yeah, hot and sweet, but the other half of me? needs it to be a hallucination. So much potential in that. Way intenser than the real thing. Guh I am so torn and it's all your fault! I'm gonna spend so much time wondering which part version I like better. Meh. BTW, I love your John. OMG! *worships*

You know, I vote this was a hallucination, it would be interesting to see how John would deal with it once they get back to Atlantis. Just MHO ;) Great story, could literally see the steam rising off Rodney's back... :D

Author's Response: Seeing where John is at the end of this, I'd say he represses like mad. Especially because he, like you, isn't exactly sure whether or not it was a hallucination. -- Thank you for your kind words!

So will you be answering the question of the day? For my part, I'd say real, though a hallucination has potential for a very entertaining sequel as well. Very enjoyable and hot (in more ways than one) story.

Author's Response: But answering the question would mean to take away the fun of speculating you obviously have. So, no. Not answering. :o) But thank you for the lovely feedback!

Yeah, the vision of the glory that be Rodney. Yum. And somehow I don't think that was a hallucination. I'd friggin love to see a sequel, because somehow I just don't see Rodney being able to stand not knowing if what he and John had done was a hallucination or not. ;) ----}-@ Krys

Author's Response: Ah, but who tells you that - if it was a hallucination - Rodney has had the very same hallucination John had?

Yeah! And wow! And ... incoherent sounds of pleasure .... enjoyed this very much! Thank you for sharing this ... Rossendale

Author's Response: I do love those sounds, and I'm indecently pleased that you liked the story this much.

Yes! It was hot and languid and sensual. I'd really, really like a sequal to find out if John had imagined the whole thing or not. Please?

Author's Response: While I thank you for your feedback, I'm not so sure about a sequel. Some things are better if not analysed to death. Maybe John did hallucinate the encounter. Maybe he didn't. In the end, it's all in the eye of the beholder.

Whoa, that was hot, literally hehehe Oh man, they gotta pick up where they left off! Perhaps a sequel?

Author's Response: Perhaps, perhaps, perhaps. Though not likely. And where exactly did they leave off? Was anything there to begin with?

Oh, hot- quite literally in this case :). So, was it real, or a vision? I'm hoping for real myself ;). Laura.

Author's Response: It's all in the eye of the beholder. I'm glad you enjoyed the story!