Wraithbait

Wow. That was just brutal....

Um...Why does this only have a PG-13? This deserves an R for violence at least.

This is one os those stories that slides in under the radar like a knife's blade to the heart--and it takes a moment to realize a mortal wound has been delivered. Beautifully, powerfully done.I wish I had not read it while at the same time appreciate for what it is. The imagery will haunt me for a long while, I'm afraid. The best stories are not necessarily the ones that make you smile, but the ones that stick with you, for whatever the reason...

Jesus. *stunned* That last sentence was absolutely amazing. Cinematic thing of deadly beauty. -----}-@ Krys

EEEW!!!! You talk about a chill down the spine! I have goosebumps, I promise you.

Author's Response: I'm not sure if munchkin brings out the best or the worst in me, but she certainly does like the dark stuff! And I can always deliver that.

oh my god! fantastic! typical shep not wanting to shot the beasly little creatures, nice ending.

Oh heavens, this was good. Didn't read the warning, so it was very unexpected.. I think you need a higher rating though..all that blood. Definitely a fic I won't forget any time soon. Thank you.

Even though I saw the warning, I'd managed to convince myself that it wasn't going to be one of the team ending up dead. So I had a very gutteral reaction when it actually happened. I think I actually flinched away from the screen. Props to you! That was fucking scary, and aweful, and mostly in the good way. Favourite line: Sheppard's unsaid "sorry".

You know, I'm philosophically opposed to children killing our team. Going to have to have a word with them about that! Bad childen! Wonderful, haunting images, though - them swarming Ronon and taking him down... *shivers* Thanks

Author's Response: I'm philosphically opposed to the team dying period - I don't even want them to get old! And yet these stories keep happening! This is munchkin's fault though, she asked for dark.