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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
08 Feb 2006 1:41 am
Very nice. Poor Rodney all swallowed up by his emotions. I'm glad John was there for him, though I wonder just what it was that made him take so long. Still, he got it in the end and I hope Rodney trusts him and they make it work. Laura.

Author's Response: I think that John - just didn't get that there was a problem. I mean, everyone's used to Rodney being a little bit strange by now, and they're used to him working himself into a coma, so maybe it's not such a big deal. And also John's male, which, no offense against the male half of the species, but most men are pretty slow. *g* anyway, thanks! I'm really glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Rank_N_Filed (Anonymous)
06 Feb 2006 6:32 am
Ouch! This hurt so wonderfully well. So painful, and amazing. Wonderful, wonderful job.
Reviewer: Kerensa (Signed)
06 Feb 2006 4:47 am
Very good story. The use of small letters instead of capitals for most of the story shows just how fragile Rodney is feeling. Poor baby, he thinks that them making him rest is a jail sentence. I'm glad that John finally steps in and saves him.
Reviewer: Joolz (Signed)
06 Feb 2006 4:36 am
I love it when Rodney has a little bit of a breakdown. You would do, wouldn't you? John is there for him, yay!
Reviewer: ceitie (Anonymous)
06 Feb 2006 2:21 am
Very, very good. Really gives the sense of Rodney's disconnectedness and downward spiral, and the end is perfect.
Reviewer: brenda k. (Anonymous)
06 Feb 2006 2:11 am
You made me cry for Rodney, he was so broken. Thank you for writing this.
Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
06 Feb 2006 2:07 am
Gods, the pain that Rodney's in. About damned time John came around and helped the poor man out. Exquisite in the angst, m'dear. ----}-@ Krys