Reviews For The Miracle

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Reviewer: nim the cat (Signed)
01 Mar 2006 4:39 pm
tomato, tomahto. she accuses John and the others of doing bad stuff, but thinks it's OK for her to commit genocide (as Chris told them). What's ERD?

Author's Response: 1. ERD - External Relations Department. Those very guys who maintain the balance in Pegasus Galaxy. More Wraith-like part of the Old One’s people population. 2. Mouse does not think it’s OK. Or good. Or whatever. She thinks it would be ‘safer’ (which might or might not be true) for people not to have around the population which after the event in question ran to the streets, cutting goat’s throats and celebrating the death of a bunch of the young girls (for no one else was there - no government representatives, no army, no ‘rich people’, etc.)- perfect victory. However those are adult issues, it is hardly appropriate to discuss them on the site which is visited by children. Please E-mail me if you want to discuss it any further. 3. Don’t you see: Mouse is not cute and has nasty temper. Sheppard is cute and likable. They would do exactly the same thing, and one of them will be pardoned by the general public, and the other will not. 4. Investigated MS issue. Pony Tail is Mary Sue, not Mouse. He is the only character in this story who doesn’t have a human prototype. His prototype is my Subaru.
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Reviewer: nim the cat (Signed)
28 Feb 2006 11:30 am
Bloody brilliant, on so many levels there is no place to discuss them. Mouse was turning into an annoying Mary sue, until you turned the story on her and showed her other side - like a kid: "but I didn't wanna break it!" Of course she didn't understand John - she was a worse hypocrate than she accused everybody else to be! But... what was going on with Carson...?

Author's Response: Unfortunately this story is not over. Carson is turning into non-Al type of Wraithling (those who serve in ERD). You think the Old Boy would risk his bony ass for nothing coming into such yucky place as city of A? Mouse is Shep’s ‘reflection in the tar pit’ - all the same, all the opposite. Hypocrisy is not her main feature - selfishness is. But she almost died as a child after she saw frozen hedgehog (somebody disturbed its sleep, it got out its hole and froze to death), while Sheppard would gladly enjoy the site of dying being. Genetics is a powerful force...
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Reviewer: nim the cat (Signed)
16 Feb 2006 5:59 am
WTH???? but: "Never thought that being a Wraith was a sexually-transmitted disease…” great, GREAT sentence. quote-worthy, in fact :-)

Author's Response: What is WTH? Sorry - poor foreigner. It took me quite a while to figure out what LOL is. Save for ROFL.

Author's Response: Never mind - found it. Is it good or bad, that is the question.
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Reviewer: nim the cat (Signed)
09 Feb 2006 8:24 am
why can you write such great original characters and i can't? why? waaahhhh!

Author's Response: Thank you. Don't write them - look for them. ‘Looking’ has one great minus though - I cannot change what those guys do or say. They are very much independent.
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