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Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous)
07 Jan 2007 1:22 am
I...I don't know. There didn't seem to e a 'ship to it, and I overall didn't understand it. I think the pronouns might've had something to do with it, or the formatting of very long paragraphs, or perhaps you didn't reread it or beta it to see if it made sense, but this was basically impossible to follow, sorry. The parts I did get-Rodney interfacing with tech accidentally, John..becoming a ship? could definitely make an engaging story.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
19 Feb 2006 1:58 pm
This was a great story, very complex and intriguing. I liked the idea of the Protection and how her AI ended up merging with John. That would have been bad enough, but then there's a Wraith virus to complicate things further. Seeing this from Rodney's pov, getting his sense of fear/panic that he could lose John, made it all the more tense, as did the whole 'we' thing whenever John/Protection spoke about themselves. Skippy had just the right level of menace that I would imagine a Wraith virus to have, and it combined well with the corruption of Rodney's snark that Skippy added to its 'personality'. The ending was great too, Rodney wondering just what had been John and what had been the ship. I like to think that the fact that John was perfectly happy to stay in Rodney's arms answers that question :). Laura

Author's Response: Thank you! I was a little worried about introducing an original character, even if she was a spaceship. ^_^ I'm very fond of the protection myself. I'm very much hoping that cannon will someday prove that Atlantis is actually sentient when at full power, because I like A.I.s way more than I should. *G*
Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
16 Feb 2006 2:59 pm
Wow. Wait a minute... Didn't Skippy say something that John had been bleeding? What a wonderful and sad story. I wonder if they'll ever some across the race that Protector was a part of again? Maybe, hm? And I bet Protector got the idea from Rodney... from what had happened when the Goa'uld from the Trust had compromised Atlantis' systems. Oy, another bit'o angst for our beloved scientist. What a fantastic story,and so wonderfully written. Loved the slashy bits, too! ;) ----}-@ Krys

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. (^_^)
Reviewer: Silverthreads (Anonymous)
16 Feb 2006 6:37 am
Interesting tale! I liked this very much.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It was fun to write.
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