Reviews For The Best Laid Plans
It was good to see John and Rodney back on stable ground, but sad that the mutual guilt and uncertainty made Rodney and Radek's first conversation quite unproductive. I'm sure it ws all straightened out eventually though. Laura.
Great start. It was sad to see how dented Rodney's confidence was, but t was good to see John's feelings on the matter and how determined he was to correct Rodney's perceptions. Radek and Carson were good too. Laura.
Reviewer: Pennydreadful (Anonymous)
18 Feb 2006 1:28 am
Aaawww!! :) I love these, please write more! Please, please, please!! (if begging doesn't work , what will? ;)
Reviewer: Daniella (Anonymous)
18 Feb 2006 12:33 am
This is really a great story. THe way you describe the character emotions; not overly emotional or verbal, makes it seem real. THe stilted conversations, the avoidance etc. It really is fantastic and I look forward to the next chapter!