i love this. it captures everything it needs to, for such a short piece. and while it is hot [definately], and sweet, it is slightly trajic and sad at the same time. The last line kind of gives you that twinge in your abdomen, and you feel like though Rodney wants to be there - obviously - he's unsure of the situation; like he doesn't trust it... i love it. melencholy and hopeful all at once. lovely work
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is very kind of you to say. I'm really glad you enjoyed it--it's maybe my second SGA fic ever, and I'm really delighted that it's held up. Thank you again!
Reviews For A Skewed Universe
Reviewer: kibou_sueshijuu (Anonymous)
06 Nov 2006 8:09 pm
That is so sweet, Shep always brings something human in Rodney;)
Mmmmmmm... *hums happily* ----}-@ Krys
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
20 Mar 2005 7:39 pm
That was hot, but also sweet...and far too short *vbg*. Laura.