Wraithbait

Wow, that was really beautiful. I like how you described certain elements of each character, it was very mystical. *grins*

Author's Response: Thanks - I was going for a kind of surreal feeling, so I'm glad that worked!

Great story. I loved the tension at the start; Rodney trying to snark away his fear, John all protective and threatening. And then it wasn't what they expected at all. Rodney's experiences were very well written, giving great images and striking at the core of each person, giving him the most important insight into each one and allowing him to tell them all that he understands. Great stuff and I particularly loved the ending. Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have a soft spot for Snarky!Rodney and Protective!John. So happy you enjoyed this - you always leave great feedback.

The ending made me say, "Oh," out loud. Wow. The imagery in this piece is exquisite, truly. Write more, please!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad the imagery worked for you - I was trying to create a kind of surreal tone. I'm definitely writing more SGA. *g*

It reads like a myth, very cool.

Author's Response: Thanks! I was trying for a kind of mythic sort of feel, almost surreal. Glad it worked for you.

very very interesting. beautiful imagery. bravo

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it.

Fascinating

Author's Response: Thanks!

wow! Beautifully written, the imagery was fantastic :D Loved it, thank you!

Author's Response: I'm happy the imagery worked for you. I played with it a lot. Thanks so much for commenting.