Wraithbait

Lovely, I like the 'window' perspective. Very nice insights into both characters.

Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted to experiment a little, and I'm glad that you liked the format.

These vignettes made me think about continuity in the progression of one's life. Sometimes you can identify specific activities/decisions and other times the just essence of who you are provies the only connection between the past and present. Thanks for the look back on John and Rodney separately and, finally, together.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's so cool that I made someone think :)

and all i ahve to say to that is: awwww..... ^____^

Author's Response: :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.

I really liked the rhythm of this piece & the way that you mirrored their lives throughout - & the perfect outcome of them being together. Lovely! :-) Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you! I was a bit worried about the repetition of the structure, I'm glad that it worked.

very nice; very sweet. i love how you managed to keep it short but effective and your attention to detail had me squeeing with joy. very nicely done! congrats on this!

Author's Response: Thank you! Squeeing is always a good thing :)

That was sweet. I liked that you tied the canon in with original thoughts about their childhood. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that my choices worked for you.