Reviews For New Beginnings

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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
12 Mar 2006 11:35 pm
Another great chapter. I loved Daniel's reaction and how John knew something was up. Jack and Sam's news was good though, as was Daniel's invitation to be godfather. It was a very hot chapter, but also that bitterswet edge with them having to hide while Jack and Sam were free to have kids. I hope you will continue this. Laura.

Author's Response: I glad you enjoyed this. The pairing really appeals to me for some reason. I have no immediate plans to write another one, but I also didn't feel right saying it was completed, because I hadn't intended to write the two sequels. I wish there was a "maybe" category for series *g*
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
12 Mar 2006 11:15 pm
Okay, that was hot. But I loved those final few paragraphs where John contemplates whether his new promotion is worth all the creeping around. It's a difficult decision with so many people depending on him. Laura.

Author's Response: *g r i n* Thank you! I'm glad the teensy bit of plot I snuck in there resonated with you. As much as I love PWPs (reading and writing them), I do my best to slip another level in there.
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
12 Mar 2006 11:07 pm
Great start, with Daniel *finally* getting to Atlantis :). I was amused that John had to split Daniel and Rodney up to avoid the endless bickering *g*. Loved the firt kiss and the fact that it grew from there. And then there was Jack giving John The Talk and John's assumption that that meant there was a 'thing' between them. Jack's news of his marriage was a surprise, but I'm glad, partly for Jack and Sam being happy, and partly because it means Jack isn't there to cause trouble between John and Daniel- which was something I was worried about. Off to read the next part now. Laura.

Author's Response: Thank you! As a bigtime J/D shipper, I was having a really hard time working out how Daniel could just be going off to Atlantis without him, and it struck me that it was simple - the love was unrequited. And then *boom* I had a story. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
New Beginnings
Reviewer: Rosemary (Anonymous)
12 Mar 2006 8:48 pm
Please update, I like this pairing;P

Author's Response: Thanks. I'll try. They're definitely my crack!pairing. I don't have anything planned, but I didn't have the second and third one's planned either.
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Reviewer: tracy-thenaggingone (Anonymous)
12 Mar 2006 6:22 am
cute and sweet and damn hot! continue quickly please!

Author's Response: Hee. Thank you! Did you read all three? If so, I can make no promises that there will be more, but then again, there weren't supposed to be three...
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