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Sin city ;) Nice Yours GB

What a lovely look at all seven sins. You tied them all into John's state of mind perfectly.

Oh, that was lovely, a nice idea! I was so sad when John punched Rodney and blamed himself for that afterwards when Rodney wouldn't wake up, but luckily there was a happy end for the two of them! :) Btw, Rodney didn't nearly destroy an entire universe but nearly an entire solar system, that's an important difference. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you enojoyed it.

That was incredible. I love how you wrote and incorporated all the sins into the story. Pretty much seamless, and wonderfully paced. Love the style. ----}-@ Krys

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked the story.