Reviews For Unexpectedly Lucky
Really good story this. The desciption of the allergic reaction is wonderful, and proves how severe these can be. Makes Rodney's 'whining' seem suddenly understandable! Also loved the way he thinks he is off the team, but John makes it clear he isn't. Very good.
Reviewer: miscbills (Anonymous)
04 Jul 2006 2:34 am
I enjoyed this and John is right. If it happen on Atlantis, Rodney would have been in serious trouble.
Reviewer: Kerensa (Anonymous)
23 Apr 2006 7:54 pm
Poor Rodney. Only he could almost die from toothpaste. Since I read this story the first time, I've been noticing all the things that have a touch of lemon or orange juice and it is amazing how many little things could kill him.
“Um…thanks.” He grinned shyly. “I should’ve known you’d be too scared to go off-world on your own. It’s a good thing you have me to protect you.” Heh, that was lame... especially for you, Rodney. Heh. I never tire of reading this one hon. ----}-@
Oh, poor Rodney :(. Not only does he have that severe reaction to the toothpaste, but he has an equally severe attack of low self esteem :(. I blame his father for being angry about spoiled plans when Rodney had his first reaction and making Rodney feel embarrassment and blame, as if he'd done it on purpose ::grrr::. Yay for the fact that John speaks McKay and knew how to get round his bout of lowness. It was good to get some of the familiar banter and snark at the end, the status quo returned and Rodney once more self-assured now that John had laid out the whole best friend thing for him :). Laura.
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
24 Mar 2006 12:21 am
Yay! that was awesome! I started to get dizzy reading it, then I realized I was holding my breath when Rodney couldn't breathe :O LOL Fantastic whumping, wonderful descriptions and beautifully written friendship :D Thanks!