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Reviewer: mangst (Anonymous)
26 Mar 2006 1:03 am
Oh, fantastic. I loved the ending it was so ambigious. Did Carson get rescued and now he's just to exhausted to wake up properly, or did he dream the whole rescue. Shiver!

Author's Response: Thankies! If you're still cold, the next item to be posted will warm you up! :D
White
Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
26 Mar 2006 12:57 am
Wow. Please tell me there's more to this? Is this real? Or a dream/nightmare? Excellent work, hon. ----}-@ Krys

Author's Response: Thank you kindly! The whole point was to muck about with your head and leave you uncertain. At the moment it's a standalone, I'm afraid, though several people on my LJ have asked for a sequel.
White
Reviewer: klostes (Anonymous)
25 Mar 2006 8:47 pm
I love this story; it's perfectly creepy in all the right ways. Rodney asking *Carson* if he's dreaming; Carson dreaming Atlantis... *shiver* You had said something, I believe, in your LJ about there being more to this tale. Will there be any more?

Author's Response: Thank you, and wow! someone *else* reads my LJ, wOOt! That's three. *g* I don't know about a sequel; it arrived like this and I'm tempted to just leave it alone.
White
Reviewer: brenda k. (Anonymous)
25 Mar 2006 8:37 pm
brrr! This totally creeps me out!! I will make an executive decision that they're all safe for my own peace of mind. *g*

Author's Response: Very sensible. I'm certain that they would rescue him, too. :)
White
Reviewer: Silverthreads (Anonymous)
25 Mar 2006 7:27 pm
This is cool. Who is dreaming, who is awake, who is experiencing what reality. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you kindly! :)
White
Reviewer: TLI (Anonymous)
25 Mar 2006 3:25 pm
That was... that was intense. There was just the right amount of description in all the right places, and Carson's switching between 'realities', so to speak, sent shivers down my spine. Excellent piece of writing.

Author's Response: Thank you. I just wanted to mess with people's heads here! *g*
White
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