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Reviewer: Zoe Rayne (Signed)
28 May 2005 4:10 pm
Lovely story. I like how you captured the inevitability of Sumner's death and John's guilt over it.
Reviewer: Leah (Signed)
26 Apr 2005 1:33 am
Truly excellent story. I loved the circling detail of John's imagining what else could have happened, but always ending up with Sumner dead, and despite that, that he could never have saved him, the guilt is palpable, as real to the reader as it is to the character. Wonderfully well done.